caricaur lore

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The moon winked out.

The silver glow to the water

faded

and the liquid arms

suffocating some caricaurs

splashed to the soil.

The creatures quit dancing,

all of them,

panting and flopping to the wet ground.

In the sky, the lightning faded

behind the horizon.

And it was still barely after sunrise.

Like the lightning

had decided

killing a god

was on its to-do list

before breakfast

and now

it was going to snack on some trees

and have a brunch with some rats in the leaves.

That’s it? I asked,

floating in the still lake.

I thought the air would tremble,

or the water would start vanishing without the moon’s pull

or something.

But it just winked out

and it’s gone

and now it’s quiet

and nothing even smells singed.

But the sea didn’t answer.

And the caricaurs on shore

started to notice me

bobbing in the water

so they waved at me,

saying it was safe now

and I opened my mouth to tell them

they were exactly the same as the dracans

who worshiped the moon

but I stopped.

I was here,

communing with a deity in the water

about to tell some creatures off for following a deity in the air.

Are you, I sent to the sea, preparing me

for something

the way the lightning used these caricaurs?

The sea seemed to chuckle,

Of course.

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