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The fire
and smoke
summoned flying shadows
blotting out the sun
and they brought
silent rain
upon the flames.
I just
treaded water, close enough to land
I could touch down if I got tired
but far enough out that the shocking heat from the trees
didn’t scorch my face
and I could keep
moving under the cold water
to keep the rest of me warm.
So I waited
between icy liquid
and radiating air
while the flying shadows
tried to stop the fire
but all that green
burned
like old logs,
not new ones.
So I waited.
And the shadows started diving
for the middle of the lake
revealing themselves
not to be shadows
but huge-beaked things
with feathers on their wings
and scales on their legs
scooping water
with claws and mouths
to pour onto the fires.
None of them noticed me
except for one, small-by-comparison,
who spat out a mouthful of water
and soared over to me
screaming, “Naiad!
Give us your aid!”
Well.
I wasn’t a naiad
nor did I know what that was
except
a bit of my brain
informed me what that was
and also
translated what this creature was saying in its language
into words
I could understand,
so the response that popped out of my mouth
didn’t help my case
for not being a water fairy creature thing:
“Why did the rain deity give me an ability to understand languages?”
The creature
then plowed through the water,
splashing waves,
but stopping before crushing me
then almost sank
before rapidly paddling with its trio of legs.
“Naiad,” it said, beak clacking, “dump the lake on the fire and save the garden!”
“I’m not a naiad!” I said. “I’m…I’m a mortal.”
“Haha, trickster.” Then it put a claw on my head, still frantically paddling with the other two legs.
“Do it.”
I stared. “What?”
This made it pause. “You’re compelled to do what I say when my claw touches you. Dump the lake on the fire.”
“I can’t.” I pushed the claw away. “I’m not a naiad.”
It put the claw on my head again. “Say that again.”
“Look, I’m literally just a mortal. What are you supposed to be?”
“Well, be that way then,” it said, and scooped a bunch of water in its beak
and took off in a flurry of feathers.
I wiped
my sopping face
and stared after its
fluffy tail,
joining the other shadows
pouring rain sprinkles
on the climbing flames,
confused
but mostly annoyed
it hadn’t answered my question.
Then I treaded water
thinking
I really needed a better name
than “mortal,”
since that’s what Mrflfip called me
and the blankets
and the rats
and Coach Purturbelly,
and none of those peeps
really stood up for me.
But everyone in my hometown
just called each other
people, and I couldn’t call myself that,
that was too vague.
And the mountain rain
seemed to say my ancestors
lived underwater
so I could call myself
what they used to call themselves
except that a witch brought us to land
and changed our memories
so I didn’t know what we called ourselves before then,
or if I’d even like
what we’d called themselves.
So there
in the lake
I decided to call myself
an adventurer,
not a “people,”
not an “underwater creature changed by a witch,”
and certainly not “the mortal.”
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