Roses are overdone

so I thought, could I bring a fresh new twist

to this metaphor of love and thorns?

Could I bring attention to the roots, the leaves,

the multitude of colors?

Or have those

also been overused to death?

~~

Hey, here’s a brainstorm idea:

in ancient Asia and Europe,

they bred roses to have more petals

by adapting the stamens into petals.

Roses used to only have five,

but now they hold countless,

too many to keep track of

before they crumble,

so I guess

when you pick one

to play, “They love me,

they love me not,”

you might not

discover the answer

before it falls apart

like our ancestors intended.

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(Do I actually know what this poem is talking about? Uh…not really, it was just a fun thought experiment.)

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